英语作文,帮忙看下有没有什么语法问题,不连贯的地方忙帮干一下,是一篇要求减少课程的申请信Dear professor:I'm writing to request to withdraw from two courses:History of industry and Electronic ProductionOne factor i
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英语作文,帮忙看下有没有什么语法问题,不连贯的地方忙帮干一下,是一篇要求减少课程的申请信Dear professor:I'm writing to request to withdraw from two courses:History of industry and Electronic ProductionOne factor i
英语作文,帮忙看下有没有什么语法问题,不连贯的地方忙帮干一下,是一篇要求减少课程的申请信
Dear professor:
I'm writing to request to withdraw from two courses:History of industry and Electronic Production
One factor is that I prepare to attend the exam of CET 6 and some qualification training.So is there too heavy load of study on my shoulder that I cannot afford previous course.On another factor,the two courses which I want to withdraw is not essential for this semester.I have no other choice but to decrease my course lord.
Otherwise,I would also like to request a tuition refund,if my situation is come up to the standard.Thank you for your attention to these requests.If you have any question ,please feel free to contract me at 1111 .I look forward to hearing from you soon.
yours sincerely.
英语作文,帮忙看下有没有什么语法问题,不连贯的地方忙帮干一下,是一篇要求减少课程的申请信Dear professor:I'm writing to request to withdraw from two courses:History of industry and Electronic ProductionOne factor i
嗯,写的挺不错,我只改了一些小瑕疵:
I'm writing to request to withdraw from two courses:History of Industry and Electronic Production.
One factor behind my decision is that I am preparing to attend the CET 6 exam and some qualification training.Thus the weight of the previous course load has become quite heavy on my shoulder,and I cannot afford to bear such a weight.Another factor is that the two courses from which I wish to withdraw are not essential for this semester.I have no other choice but to decrease my course load in this manner.
In addition,I would also like to request a tuition refund,if my situation comes up to the standard.Thank you for your attention to these requests.If you have any questions,please feel free to contract me at 1111 .I look forward to hearing from you soon.
第一句,就说I want to withdraw就好了。他当然知道你是writing to him
i prepare~ i need to
training~ trainings
So is there too heavy load of study on my shoulder that I cannot afford previous course~ So I am...
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第一句,就说I want to withdraw就好了。他当然知道你是writing to him
i prepare~ i need to
training~ trainings
So is there too heavy load of study on my shoulder that I cannot afford previous course~ So I am not able to afford the workload of the underlying courses
On another factor~ Another factor is that, the two courses are not essential
I have no other choice but to decrease my course lord.~ I have no other choice but to release myself a bit by withdrawing the courses
otherwise~ furthermore
I would also like to request a tuition refund~ 去掉also
if my situation is come up to the standard. ~ if my request is approved
please feel free to contract me ~ 是contact不是contract。。。
Yours sincerely要写在左下角
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