(英语)高手来看这句话有无语病?如果有 帮忙修改下.. My home is about 5 kilometers from school. I get up at seven o'clock.I eat a quick breakfast .Then I walk to the bus stop,the early bus takes me to school. It takes about 20 minu

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(英语)高手来看这句话有无语病?如果有 帮忙修改下.. My home is about 5 kilometers from school. I get up at seven o'clock.I eat a quick breakfast .Then I walk to the bus stop,the early bus takes me to school. It takes about 20 minu

(英语)高手来看这句话有无语病?如果有 帮忙修改下.. My home is about 5 kilometers from school. I get up at seven o'clock.I eat a quick breakfast .Then I walk to the bus stop,the early bus takes me to school. It takes about 20 minu
(英语)高手来看这句话有无语病?
如果有 帮忙修改下..
My home is about 5 kilometers from school. I get up at seven o'clock.I eat a quick breakfast .Then I walk to the bus stop,the early bus takes me to school. It takes about 20 minutes.Next I walk to school.
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(英语)高手来看这句话有无语病?如果有 帮忙修改下.. My home is about 5 kilometers from school. I get up at seven o'clock.I eat a quick breakfast .Then I walk to the bus stop,the early bus takes me to school. It takes about 20 minu
有一句你是想说你快速的吃完早饭,这句不对,应该是I eat breakfast quikly.要是都用一般现在时的话.最后一句,Next不对,应该是and then.看的出来这个应该是你自己写的 .

改成这样更好：My home is about 5 kilometers from school .I usually get up at seven o'clock .After eating a quick breakfast ,I walk to the bus stop and the early bus will take me to school within bout 20 minutes .Finally ,I walk towards my school .

next改为then比较好点

My home is about 5 kilometers away from school. I get up at seven o'clock.After having a quick breakfast , I walk to the bus stop.The early bus takes me to school. It takes me about 20 minutes.Finally I walk to school.你看这样行不？

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