(⊙⊙?)请各位高手帮忙改一下我的作文.In this information-fast age, people’s speed is an important role in the social. The transport regarded by people to get more advantage, but now it avoid us action. It is one of the most serious p

(⊙⊙?)请各位高手帮忙改一下我的作文.In this information-fast age, people’s speed is an important role in the social. The transport regarded by people to get more advantage, but now it avoid us action. It is one of the most serious p
(⊙⊙?)请各位高手帮忙改一下我的作文.
In this information-fast age, people’s speed is an important role in the social. The transport regarded by people to get more advantage, but now it avoid us action. It is one of the most serious problems in getting faster. Although there are so many vehicles used by us, one man’s meant is another man’s poison. How to choice the fast one? Hardly anyone can positively like riding bicycle from home to work. By the bicycle in the city, you maybe always breath more carbon dioxide. Inevitably you arrive at your destination almost tired. But when working-go or home-go people are crowded with bus, you’re surprised to see it. On the other way, it is easy to mooch in this kind bus and spend on too much traffic. So people are accustomed to taking in the danger. Bicycle or bus have the reputation of not only being dangerous, but saying nothing about expedience. By comparison, taxt offer a great variety of civilized comforts. You can sit on comfortable seat, just tell the driver where you go and it travels fairly safely at high speeds, that the road is free. If it is not, the taxt can be called hardly. At the worst, sitting in the taxt in the traffic jam, you must spend on it a lot of money. So nobody are prepared in busy traffic by taxt.
Subway is the newly transport in China, so many international city without it. Although in Guangzhou, it is development long time, people didn’t still take it. Because they can’t be intimidated to know what place it gets them. But nothing can match them for speed and easy-going. You do not have to devise ways of taking your mind off the traffic problem, its number of runs has so many and always on time. Some people go to extremes to its safety problem, one thing is certain: subway’s staff member will take the consequences of passengers’ safe. So subway exerts so much fascination on me that I always take it.

(⊙⊙?)请各位高手帮忙改一下我的作文.In this information-fast age, people’s speed is an important role in the social. The transport regarded by people to get more advantage, but now it avoid us action. It is one of the most serious p
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